Jul 15, 2018

Daisies : Tricube

Yellowish
small daisies
dance and smile

whispering
lullaby
to the sky

a sweet sight
their gentle
pure demure


Tricube : Each line contains three syllables, Each stanza contains three lines, and poem contains three stanzas. 



10 comments:

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is a sweetly phrased as the daisy itself.

Marian said...

Aw, love that last line especially.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Gorgeous!!! Especially love the last one 💖💖

Anonymous said...

the elegance of the simple, humble daisy! well done :)

Susie Clevenger said...

I love daises.. This makes me smile.

Jim said...

A patch of daisies in the wild. Sooo nice, Vandana. Daisies are Mrs. Jim's favorite flower.
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ayala said...

Tender and sweet.

purplepeninportland.com said...

This is lovely! Love the middle one.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Delightful!

hyperCRYPTICal said...

I love daises too (and dandelions).
Anna :o]