The castle
Cloaked in snowy fur
The castle
Glistening under sun with razzle-dazzle
Guarded by knights of pine fir
Calmly waiting for her
The castle.
Rondelet-
Seven lines with rhyme scheme of AbAabbA.
Underneath the percolating rain drops in sand, beneath the dew drops rolling down the leaf blades, among the playful waves of roaring oceans, there’s a deep silence, only heard by a heart calm within : Vandana Sharma
12 comments:
nice...i hope she finds her castle...i like the trees as knights....
and i love castles...
Every fairy princess needs a castle.
I agree with Brian. The tree knights - great image!
A fairytale scene caught in your words. :)
Buildings do wait for us. Beautiful capture.
I like snowy fur and pine-knights---- magic lines Vandana :)
That's a very pretty picture.
Oh how lovely… we do not live in a castle, but the fir trees are blanketed and sparkling with ice and snow all around our home!
I think I've visited that caste. I'm not familiar with the Rondelet, yours has intrigued me. I really must learn more.
Short and sweet with a new form. Nicely Vandana!
Hank
Razzle-dazzle. I like the sound of that. I also think I might try my hand at the rondelet.
Great poem and what a lovely castle!
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