Dec 9, 2013

The Castle: A Rondelet


















The castle
Cloaked in snowy fur
The castle
Glistening under sun with razzle-dazzle
Guarded by knights of pine fir
Calmly waiting for her
The castle.

 Rondelet- Seven lines with rhyme scheme of AbAabbA.

12 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice...i hope she finds her castle...i like the trees as knights....
and i love castles...

aspiritofsimplicity said...

Every fairy princess needs a castle.

Karen said...

I agree with Brian. The tree knights - great image!

Jinksy said...

A fairytale scene caught in your words. :)

Susan said...

Buildings do wait for us. Beautiful capture.

Sumana Roy said...

I like snowy fur and pine-knights---- magic lines Vandana :)

Kerry O'Connor said...

That's a very pretty picture.

Laura said...

Oh how lovely… we do not live in a castle, but the fir trees are blanketed and sparkling with ice and snow all around our home!

Pealogic said...

I think I've visited that caste. I'm not familiar with the Rondelet, yours has intrigued me. I really must learn more.

kaykuala said...

Short and sweet with a new form. Nicely Vandana!

Hank

Anonymous said...

Razzle-dazzle. I like the sound of that. I also think I might try my hand at the rondelet.

Our Neck of the Woods said...

Great poem and what a lovely castle!