As the
starry night descends on, earth’s lap
she brings heavenly
sap, and her scent
she unfurls the moon, from under a veil
enchanting dales,
with moonlight’s boon
her cape of bright stars, floats among flowers
forever showers,
peace near and far
dreams shine bright, away from reality
embracing tranquility, of night
Toddaid: A Welsh poetry form. Quatrains, L1 10 syllables, L2 9 syllables.
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11 comments:
Thia is a wonderful tribute to peace... lovely
Such a peaceful poem, I love how the lines drift, beautiful and calm.
Thank you for writing to the prompt. This is a lovely poem of the night and dreams!
I agree with Bjorn, there's a wonderful serenity in your words and images. (Kerfe_
I enjoyed the back and forth form and the peaceful, easy feeling of your poem.
An enchanting dream of a poem for peace.
An enchanting dream of a poem for peace.
I love "tranquility of night". Beautiful writing.
Gorgeous, Vandana, a symphony of imagery evoking peace!
Lovely write, Vandana. The serenity of night and peace beautifully evoked.
I yearn for that tranquil feeling.
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