Underneath the percolating rain drops in sand, beneath the dew drops rolling down the leaf blades, among the playful waves of roaring oceans, there’s a deep silence, only heard by a heart calm within : Vandana Sharma
Your ambrosial taste
lingers upon my lips
as if
kissed by a rose-red berry
Naani poetry form: Indian poetry form, 4 lines, total 20 to 25 syllables.
Wow, Vandana! Amazing.
Sweet!
A delicious bit of poetry .....
Sigh ~~~~~~~~~~~
Beating in mind that some bright red berries are poison?!?!
Oh I love it... we make a sweet soup from rose-hips here in Sweden, I love it but I I think it might be an acquired taste.
Beautiful naani!
I love your naani, Vandana! Perfectly executed :)-David [ben Alexander]
Beautiful naani.pax,dora
Beautiful!!!💝💝
A Naani, how's nice. It is so much fun to be given alternatives of short poems to a Haiku or a Limericks. Thanks, Vandana!Hank
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Wow, Vandana! Amazing.
Sweet!
A delicious bit of poetry .....
Sigh ~~~~~~~~~~~
Beating in mind that some bright red berries are poison?!?!
Oh I love it... we make a sweet soup from rose-hips here in Sweden, I love it but I I think it might be an acquired taste.
Beautiful naani!
I love your naani, Vandana! Perfectly executed :)
-David [ben Alexander]
Beautiful naani.
pax,
dora
Beautiful!!!💝💝
A Naani, how's nice. It is so much fun to be given alternatives of short poems to a Haiku or a Limericks. Thanks, Vandana!
Hank
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