Rhyming within my heartbeats,
is your love-song,
that
I hum every night,
and
float into a world,
where,
to
each other we belong.
my heart and soul devoted to you,
surrendering
all desires,
with
a faith,
to
be,
eternally
yours.
Underneath the percolating rain drops in sand, beneath the dew drops rolling down the leaf blades, among the playful waves of roaring oceans, there’s a deep silence, only heard by a heart calm within : Vandana Sharma
Rhyming within my heartbeats,
is your love-song,
that
I hum every night,
and
float into a world,
where,
to
each other we belong.
my heart and soul devoted to you,
surrendering
all desires,
with
a faith,
to
be,
eternally
yours.
25 comments:
Enjoyed your poem. Loved the shape of your poem, too. :)
This is true. Loving is giving. It comes adrift when it isn't reciprocated.
Loving also means belonging. This is lovely
Happy you dropped by to read mine
Much❤love
There person you intended this for is very lucky, Vandana - this is stunningly sweet.
Yours,
David [ben Alexander]
Exquisitely beautiful!
Sometimes form and indents seem arbitrary but you've used it beautifully here--the sense of floating pervades. Lovely.
This is beautifully done! I love it!
Hearts and love ... combining in one wonderful rush! Forever! Well done.
Written in the sand --- heart entwined ... romance personified!
Beautiful, and I love how this flows visually, like a heartbeat rising and falling.
The flow and unity of the two hearts is breathtakingly beautiful! 💕
So lovely!
Vandana, this is so heart warmingly lovely!
Love this poem. Very well done.
An exquisite poem about hearts / love.
the "i am not me" line took my breath away. love leaks here.
A very interesting declaration Vandana! Extending a 'to love' to a beloved will beget normally a response of 'to be loved' to oneself!
Hank
what a wonderful way to say it... I hope it is mutual
Interesting structure.
Very romantic....sigh !
Romance is alive and well!
Wouldn't it be loverly (of "My Fair Lady) if all were this way in a romance!!
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Love sounds best when the music of both hearts know how to harmonize with each other.
Saaaa-weet *grin* light as love should be
Beautiful words!
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