She is the dark deep night,
searching
for her moon,
to
glow her soul with his light,
sparkle
bright as the golden June.
littered
all over,
tears
of her unheard cries,
flowing
listlessly for her lover.
will
lead her to a new universe,
filled
with flowers of May,
and
lift her dark curse,
where
she will find her love lost.
16 comments:
What a great take on that phrase. Star crossed lovers indeed. I love that she is the dark expansive night. Your images are lush and your journey is cosmic. I really enjoy this.
Beautiful imagery. I like the references made to the months...reminds me of the song by Train, Drops of Jupiter.
Hopefully she finds this new universive and love. Hope all is well Vandana.
A romantic poem, Vandana! I love the image of ‘dark deep night / searching for her moon, / to glow her soul with his light’.
A poem of lost love beautifully written I love "searching for her moon,
to glow her soul with his light
What a beautiful read this poem is Vandana. Whether friend, lover or devoted wife nothing is worse that losing them for ever.
Beautifully, lyrically romantic.
Having been fortunate to have my own dark curse lifted, I hope the same for her.
Nice work, V.
A dreamy poem. :)
What a lovely craft of words
Happy Sunday Vandana. Thank you for dropping by my sumie Sunday today
Much💖love
I would love to find such a path across the starlit sky...
May that path to a new sky be illuminated clearly so that love will be seen when it is found.
I like this. <3
I too see the night sky as a romance.
She is deep dark night.. if she finds him, she will not exist. Sometimes what we long for is not what we really need...
....and one is left to ponder the difference between finding her love lost or finding her lost love. Hmmm Let's hope it's the latter.
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