If I,
be a
painter,
I’ll paint
you happiness,
azalea,
iris, orchids and
roses,
smiling ,
at every
day.
A perfect
painting, with,
a desire to
paint you, only,
If I.........
Cinquain:5 lines progressing, 2 syl's,
4 syl's,6 syl's, 8 syl's then back to 2 syl's. Same goes for subsequent stanzas.
Last line ending as the first line in case of more than one stanza.
22 comments:
Colorful and delightful
painting happiness is a good thing... with brushes and words... smiles
If only we could do so many things..nice...
A beautiful painting.
I love the poem, but love the painting even more! It is quite marvelous!
Word smithing is always an active participation in the art of loving life; sweet words like yours, cloaked in cinquain are a welcome breath of fresh air; nice job.
very nice...cheers!
This poem of yours brought a big smile to my face.
I love it so much. :) Thank you for you writing this amazing piece. :)
I haven't played with this form in a long time--nicely executed.
Painting you has to be with the right hue.. really a very joyous poem..
so would like to paint... thanks for your happiness painting
Awesome close of this. Love the way the poem is left hanging - almost unfinished. I suspect painters are seldom convinced that their work is entirely finished and there is nothing left to add.
Nice, very, and fun
You really did make me smile. This is lovely. What a pleasant, happy blog to visit. I adore your font.
This makes my heart sing, Vandana.
beautiful thoughts...if only....sigh
even the shape of the words is art :)
You do so paint with words :)
I like it.
Thanks for coming by.
Wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to paint happiness? Love the colors, too.
janet
beautiful painting.
Colors always make me smile.. Lovely write Vandana! :)
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