Charming
Warming
Slender
Tender
Your charming,
warming, innocent looks,
flowing into
slender, tender brooks.
Feathered
Creature
Blushes
Tresses
Oh! beautiful,
fair, feathered creature,
blushes, tresses
define your feature.
Tyburn
: 6 line poem having 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and
are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first,
second, third, and fourth lines. Rhyme Scheme:
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15 comments:
Wow Vandana you really nailed tyburn, and did it beautifully.
Sweet! The Tyburn is itself a kind of sculpture. Thank you for your comment on mine. I referred to the Puck in Shakespeare's "The Tempest," trying to pretend I was Shakespeare. I hope it worked.
An interesting form. Beautiful words!
Very nice... Enclosing the details of rhyming pattern is something amazing effort... :)
Not easy to get the likely choice of words in Tyurn, especially rhyming ones! Great write Vandana!
Hank
Very charming, Vandana. k.
Nice, you have captured the innocence and gentle features ~
What a charming use of form to describe this sculpture.
Just so sweet!
Oh, I feel how you love him :)x
This neat little repetitive form suits your art choice well...nicely done!!
well penned, Vandana ~
Oh yes a delightful poem with charming delightful repetition.
huh intersting...i like the form...the first words almost deconstructed and then put back together in the last lines...
What a charming post this is Vandana :)
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