I remember
you, when I walk through that door,
How every
time you held me, not let fall.
I see your
glimpse in every corner,
The way you
loved me and enamoured.
I still feel
your touch on my hands,
The soft dew
of emotion left by your strands.
As the wind
blows,
Brings your
fragrance to the fore.
Can you hear
my cries,
Heart
wrenching devotions flowing for you.
Yes, I know
that you do,
Your
gestures and care say it all.
You’re
entrenched in my soul deep within,
I remember
you from end to beginning.
17 comments:
You’re entrenched in my soul deep within,
I remember you from end to beginning.
An ending so classic in its yearnings! Many can attest to its goodness, all those loving couples! Great write Vandana!
Hank
mm the longing is palpable....the seeing them, hearing them even when they are not there...its magic...smiles.
Beautifully emotive, touches the soul :)
the memories feel vibrant and alive..sounds like a very special and close person to you..
This is beautiful and sad.
"I remember you from end to beginning" - this ending line is perfect.
I get the feeling that something is lost even if it's not said directly... but I do love what the romance in your words
I like the turn in the second part, so sad and the longing is deep ~ Lovely ending too ~
What beautifully expressed feelings here!!
A love poem of deep devotion - wonderful to go deeper and cleaner than the salt sea. Thanks for participating. k.
From end to beginning is very positive! loved the softness in this piece
"I remember you from end to beginning". How poignant and sweet!
Wow...this is just lovely. Very nicely done.
loved the feeling as i read this..
Touching, very revealing of a heart...
Love the emotion in this.
I liked the starting line! Very nice!:)
This are really deep feelings...
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