Simmering smokes
rise to the sky
follow their own paths
~ let god be the connecting link~
joining their souls
across the universe
in holy bond
Puente:
First and third stanzas have equal number of lines
Middle bridge stanza is one line
Middle bridge stanza serves as last line for first stanza and first line for last stanza
9 comments:
How very beautifully you have set out these stanzas. A lovely poem!
So simple. Beautiful, just gorgeous.
I love how you've placed the stanzas on the page too.
A puente poem about connectivity. Clever.
So incredibly beautiful, Vandana!❤️
This is beautiful. I love the imagery in the poem, and the photo accompanying it. My favourite thing, how clouds play against the mountains. Lovely to read you, Vandana.
Very nicely done, and I love your use of layout to enhance the form.
beautiful poem and beautiful presentation...I agree with Magaly, such clever writing.
Nice presentation of the stanza's and that image I see often here in the mountains.
Truly lovely Vandana!
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