Oct 21, 2015

Welcome The Dawn

Night hides away,
as dawn smiles.
Sluggish moon,
saunters away,
towing the stars,
on the way.
Night’s eyes heavy with sleep,
close dreams within.
Warm sun now shines above,
a new day begins.


19 comments:

nashvillecats2 said...

Wonderful descripton of a new day, I congratulate you.
Yvonne.

Launna said...

This is a beautiful poem about how the new day begins... I love how the night time is sleepy and dreaming... very good Vandana xox

Phil Slade said...

Great picture coupled to lovely descriptive poem. What more can I say.

Wanda Psycho said...

A beautiful mythology created in poetic form. Lovely!

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Wendy Bourke said...

A wonderful description. "Sluggish moon, saunters away" - very cool - and turned up the corners of my lips. I love it when a writer takes that little bit of a risk and injects a charming, somewhat playful, line of poetry into their work. Loved this, Vandana!

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is absolutely exquisite!!❤️

Kim M. Russell said...

A lovely slow start to a new day!

debi said...

I love all the esses... sounds wonderful to read aloud plus it is lovely.

Kerry O'Connor said...

I really like the image of the sluggish moon towing the stars.

Anonymous said...

That's gorgeous!

Stacie Eirich said...

A lyrical & enchanting poem to begin the day with. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

Gillena Cox said...

luv the way you crafted images to your new day

much love...

Helen said...

... this is lovely.

brudberg said...

I like the image of the moon pulling the stars along... wonderful

hyperCRYPTICal said...

A lovely romance of the dawn of the day. Sluggish moon - I love that too.
Kind regards
Anna :o]

Magaly Guerrero said...

I felt the birth of a new day... in my bones!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Sweetly said.

lynn__ said...

A delightful way to start a new day!

Susie Clevenger said...

Beautiful words of beginning a new day