A garden
of daffodils
stands in
my heart
each daffodil
a wish
for you.
As soft breeze flows
it carries
these
wishes
far away
far away
to you.
Gogyohka
: Japanese poetry form, written in five lines, but each line generally
represents one phrase.
15 comments:
Excellent Vandana.
Yvonne.
Such a beautiful sentiment...Spring is always at bloom in your heart
A garden of wishes - lovely - and, I think, a very evocative metaphor when one stops and thinks about it . . . a lot goes on in a garden.
Very nice love lines, Vandana.
So many good wishes in the heart will get to the ones intended. It has a way of making it happen! Nice lines Vandana!
Hank
Oh I love the thought of a garden full of daffodils... speaks of spring and hope.
The opening stanza made me smile. Not just he heart full of the flowers, but that each were a wish for another. I hope that breeze carries them to the destination.
A fascinating form which has produced most beautiful thoughts and images.
Such a beautiful thought..!
Well penned :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
This is absolutely beautiful and perfect.
Thanks, and the same to you.
B e a u t i f u l ! ! !
Delightful.
Just beautiful !
I have never seen this form before! What a lovely introduction to it.
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