May 23, 2015

Dissolving : Shadorma

Drop by drop,

                             my every part melts,

                             into wisps,

                            coalescing forever,

                            into celestial cosmos,

rolling endlessly.

                                                     Brooke Shaden Photography
Shadorma : Non rhyming poetry form with syllable count as 3/5/3/7/7/5

10 comments:

Susan said...

Interesting to imagine the joining the cosmos as a coalescence--food for thought!

Anonymous said...

I especially like the first three lines.

Blog It Or Lose It said...

A very nice feel to this -- :)

Sumana Roy said...

wonderful union...dreamlike...

humbird said...

Nice notion of 'coalescing forever', dreamy and beautiful fit to art.

ʞɐ said...

Beautifully written. :)

Anonymous said...

This is so very pretty--and your blog too!

Anonymous said...

I don't know if my comment got lost: This is a beautiful poem, and blog!

Launna said...

Such enthralling words Vandana... you always draw me into the center of the emotions xox ♡

Amber said...

Oh wow this is divine! Exquisitely beautiful love it!

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