Dec 10, 2014

The Bee Hive : Rannaicheacht Ghairid

The bee hive,
a miracle of strive,
unsurpassed hardwork sublimed,
excellent paradigm live.

Buzzing bees,
dance, hum, ruffle with ease,
gather pollen, drink sap,
fly high, wings flap in breeze.

Amber juice,
the sweet  fruit of produce,
distilled, luscious , pure,
flavour of demure exudes.

The bees thrive,
in adverse conditions survive,
their abode -  the protector,
honey collector, the bee hive.

A Poem for my daughter!

Rannaicheacht Ghairid (ron-a'yach cha'r-rid): Irish poetry form having quatrain stanzas with uneven lines. The first line has three syllables, the other three have seven. The stanza rhymes a a b a, with a cross-rhyme between three and four and the opening word or phrase or line is also included at the end (to end where it began)
A x a
x x x x x x a
x x x x x x b
x x b x x x A

12 comments:

Rose said...

A sweet poem Vandana:)

humbird said...

Very cute poem, I'm sure your daughter likes it. Good on rhymes and form! :)x

Our Neck of the Woods said...

What a neat poem! I am a beekeeper so I especially liked this one :)

Gabriella said...

I like how your poem evokes the busy activity of the bees.

Gail said...

We had bee hives our entire childhood. Then they died either from something. We don't see many any more. Nothing tastes better than freshly harvested honey on a hot biscuit.

Unknown said...

Lovely...I knew your daughter would have loved it...Am I right??

Wendy Bourke said...

Loved the whimsy in this poem - and such a fun verse for your daughter!

Brian Miller said...

they are silent now...the winter having hidden away the bees...
i rather like their honey though...smiles..

kaykuala said...

Nobody beats the bees for hard work and we unashamedly rob them as a matter of course! How cruel is mankind! Nice new form to try out! Wonderful write Vandana!

Hank

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Grace said...

The wonder of the bee workers and the bee hive ~ What a challenging form, thanks Vandana ~ I hope you are well ~

Vinitha said...

Cute poem. :)