Aquamarine transparent sea floor,
besprent with tiny shiny spores,
a marvel of nature to explore.
Blue silk waves black sky,
from the heaven pour.
Dance in rhythm, soar high.
Stars float all over,
another domain to flyover,
singing songs to a loner.
Bright glittery nano drops,
warm the ocean all so colder,
lovingly two different worlds hop.
The Burns stanza : Named after the Scottish poet Robert Burns.
Also called the Scottish stanza or six-line stave. Prior to Burns’s use, it
was known as the standard Habbie,
after Habbie Simpson. Rhyme scheme: aaabab.
21 comments:
Ah, the world of the sea and the world of the sky -- both beautiful, but different!
an exquisite image of the sea as the mirror holding the infinite...."Blue silk waves black sky, / from the heaven pour." and "Stars float all over," are my fav. images...
nice.... love the magic the little stars bring to the sea...it's like little kisses
Sea and sky such strangers to each other yet constantly touching, kissing and wondering.
Beautiful lines, Vanadana. I particularly like the second stanza.
love the dance of the light on the water...the shine rising and falling on the waves...
Hopping away! Lovely way to celebrate each other. Nothing more beautiful than this union.
I love the blue silk waves, the black sky and the floating stars....beautiful photo, which you have interpreted well!
Lovely writing here. I love how you distinguish yet connect the sea and the sky and I felt happy about their hoping around. Love this.
lovely images, as always.
Adding a little magic to a dark sea :) I love this poetry form :)
amazing poem even better the poem!! beautiful!!
Somehow when the moon lends its silver to the sea, that road across has to lead somewhere..
What a wonderful image...it just filled my heart with warmth and joy... :-)
nice! Beautiful imagery!
I love when the stars come down to greet us… beautiful Vandana!
It is such a dance of sea, land, and air. Well written poem.
Nice thoughts
blue silk waves..lovely image..the pic is amazing..
Two worlds myriad reflections and sources of much inspiration. Like your imagery and sharing of new (to me) poetic forms.
Elizabeth
I like how these two play off of each other....reflecting perfectly.... Lovely.
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