Walking through the soft snow
leaving behind the footprints
in the river of my thoughts I row
wading through the water
leaving myself altogether
for me only you matter
I can feel you
Underneath the percolating rain drops in sand, beneath the dew drops rolling down the leaf blades, among the playful waves of roaring oceans, there’s a deep silence, only heard by a heart calm within : Vandana Sharma
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19 comments:
Very romantic & beautiful poem.
...ah, you made it so easy to feel the romance here... you have a gentle tone that has deep emotional impact... loved it! smiles...
Leaving back memories.....beautiful poem.
Very romantic with a hint of yearning perhaps. Nice, resonated with me.
Very romantic Vanadana! I enjoyed the sentiment as well as the form.
How intense, that, after leaving yourself, you can still feel another.
a beautiful flow of deep longing and emotion.......
Very lyrical. Well-penned. :-)
-HA
smiles....def made me smile...the love is beautiful in this....
written in a delicate touch....
I love the idea of rowing in the river of dreams!! Lovely writing.
Oh what a romantic you are.
Sweet and romantic write ~ Liking that refrain ~
wonderfully poetic, nostalgic...
oh how lovely. and such a nice rhythm to these lines. :<)
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Ah huh. *smiles*
Particularly like rowing in a river of dreams, and the soft gentle tone you used here,
Elizabeth
It is wonderful when one has this strength of feeling...
Anna :o]
Romantic and deep in emotions :) Lovely images.
So romantic, lovely.
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