Life is fragile
and faint,
engrossed in emotions all vain,
only one thing is perfect,
and it is called the death.
A companion to the core,
it’ll never leave you alone,
loyal at your last breath,
and it is called the death.
A salvation from this world,
towards the cosmic underworld,
where every soul collects,
and it is called the death.
Kyrielle : French poetry
form, usually eight syllables per line.Rhyme scheme a. a. b. B..... c. c. b.
B..(B is the refrain)
25 comments:
yes...no one as loyal companion to the last breath as Death....chilling...
yes...no one as loyal companion to the last breath as Death....chilling...
Intriguing...!!
xoxo
Your verse like a Kyrielle Mass I sung a number of years ago now. There is salvation from this dark orb...
A remainder of that friend walking with us, one step behind until he catch up with us...
never know when it will visit.. and it comes so unexpectedly sometimes.
Yes, death is one thing no one can escape.
Very powerful words, Vandana! Your poem reminds me of the way medieval writers viewed death.
quite an interesting form; the most inevitable process of mortality; have a good Sunday
much love...
I have some trouble reading the font, Vandana, but your poem resonates. Death's shadow does accompany our journey, much as we try to ignore it.
Bone chilling thoughts in this season of radiant renewal!
Poppy
And death is the final collector ~ Good one Vandana ~
Yes it does loom beside us always waiting for that tap on our shoulder...
A chilling write - very effective.
Darkly beautiful
there's no escaping death. it will be a part of us.
Death is a certainty...maybe it can wait a little while longer though
Vandana,
What astute and true words. A sure thing for each one of us. I hope I may get to enjoy tomorrow, please!!
Eileen
Yup! I heard we are not getting out of here alive ;-)
ZQ
Death comes to everyone and when I ponder upon it (which is very seldom) I just want to enjoy all my time here all the more ..
Good poem!
Deep and meaningful.
How true. Life is unpredictable and death is not. :)
beautiful and darkly engaging!!
Intense!!
xoxo
So true, no one is as loyal as Death! There is no escaping it..
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